The lines are still a little rough but I figured out the shading......kinda. I am still learning but I am getting better!
EDIT: ALSO I forgot to add that this was inspired by Youkia Yume's "Raindrops" dojin. I wish the would just make out and get married already jk, I love the suspense and plot, how she shows the char personality traits .....everything I hope the story is continued for many,many, maaaaaany more chaps.XD