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EDIT 1: Fixed his shoes and a few other things.
Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhg. Finally done ( for now).
For
Gender bender contest. I wasn't originally gonna finish it but gave in after all the insistence. XD
Critique please
Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhg. Finally done ( for now).
For
Gender bender contest. I wasn't originally gonna finish it but gave in after all the insistence. XDCritique please
Image size
1944x2435px 1.5 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon PowerShot A1100 IS
Shutter Speed
1/20 second
Aperture
F/2.7
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Jun 4, 2011, 6:19:06 AM
Sensor Size
2mm
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Overall Vision Originality
Technique ImpactMy only major critique is that, her foot near Kagome's inner thighs looks considerably smaller in length then the one on the ground. Since you can see the dimensions of the parts of the foot there and not between his legs.
Kag's right leg (our left) seems a little odd, like the knee doesn't match up with the foot. Maybe the pant leg comes out too far in front? I'm not sure... it's hard to pick out.
I like the perspective of their faces, it looks on target, and the folds in their clothes are well done. I'm really liking Sessh's pant, the flow and poofiness is obvious and well put together.